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T O P I C R E V I E WLF DXI’ve seen her in my dreams and nightmaresReality has taken quite a turnI’ve been blessed and cursed to love herWell I hope not to get burnedCause her fire burns stronger than the flames of the sun“Don’t fear your heartbeats” said the czar’s daughter“Don’t fear to rebel and go towards me”“I fear your father’s wrath” said the brave soldier“I love deeply but I made a pact”To not be tempted by your angel’s eyesI fought for my country and I’m blessed by the kingBut the glory is nothing without you my dearI dread the golden seats and your wealthBut my heart belongs to you, but I feel is wrongYou are from the noble and feel cannot be yours “I’ll forget where I belong” she said to me“We’ll part to the west to wherever we can go”“Don’t go wrong for me” I said to my love“You are dear to the people as you are to me”Just keep your heart to them as you always doI wish to not have this clothesAnd I wish you’d not have the crownTo be just like the rest in this vast landAnd love each other without this chimesOf nobility and poverty that torn us apart“You shall must part then” she speaks to me“But I’ll be always for you in your heart”“My heart is yours forever” I said to her“And my love will always be true”Time won’t fade it nor death it willI’m now in a place like Dante’s hellI’ll go forward and I’ll make it wellI withstand to die here, no I won’tUntil I reach her in the skiesTo reach her in the temple of the skyPearltyI know you normally write more lyrically.. Is this a snippet from an ongoing story? More more! Enjoyed reading. AyeletYes, it is like a story... a ballad. Pretty. He reaches her only after death, in the sky... LF DXThank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.Cheersthequeen quote:Originally posted by LF DX:Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.Cheers mirage29 quote:Originally posted by LF DX:Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.CheersOh that's so cool, DX! I'm glad for you! Randall
“Don’t fear your heartbeats” said the czar’s daughter“Don’t fear to rebel and go towards me”“I fear your father’s wrath” said the brave soldier“I love deeply but I made a pact”To not be tempted by your angel’s eyes
I fought for my country and I’m blessed by the kingBut the glory is nothing without you my dearI dread the golden seats and your wealthBut my heart belongs to you, but I feel is wrongYou are from the noble and feel cannot be yours
“I’ll forget where I belong” she said to me“We’ll part to the west to wherever we can go”“Don’t go wrong for me” I said to my love“You are dear to the people as you are to me”Just keep your heart to them as you always do
I wish to not have this clothesAnd I wish you’d not have the crownTo be just like the rest in this vast landAnd love each other without this chimesOf nobility and poverty that torn us apart
“You shall must part then” she speaks to me“But I’ll be always for you in your heart”“My heart is yours forever” I said to her“And my love will always be true”Time won’t fade it nor death it will
I’m now in a place like Dante’s hellI’ll go forward and I’ll make it wellI withstand to die here, no I won’tUntil I reach her in the skiesTo reach her in the temple of the sky
Cheers
quote:Originally posted by LF DX:Thank you very much, it's my attempt of a ballad, let's just say that is my expression of my fear of getting close to someone I've met recently, because I'm enjoying life like I never did before, by playing gigs around my country, meeting people and making music again, but when I met this woman I was very amused and her glance shaked me quite a bit, and caused me an inner uproar that made me write that thing, I'm just in a quite special time.Cheers
Oh that's so cool, DX! I'm glad for you!
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